"Learner Profile: Calvin"
His name is Calvin and he graduated in 2010 from high school in China; however, he has not attended to college yet. He is undecided what major he will like to take but hopefully he would know soon since it is his last semester in Clip. He has been in United States for almost four years, but he only has been living in New York for three years and a half. While he was in China he used to study English in his school as a requirement of the school. He is a responsible student and dedicated in his daily routines. His major problem in English is writing and his goal this semester are to improve his skills in writing, reading and as well his vocabulary.
"Man Accused of Killing his Girlfriend in 2013 Goes on Trial"
This
article talks about a young couple who met online, Francis Alfonso, who was
found dead at her boyfriend’s apartment. It begins when Francis Alfonso decided to go
visit her boyfriend, Lithgow, on Christmas in 2012, and they fell in love and
they decided to live together. However; this lovely couple did not last long,
after Lithgow noticed that his girlfriend was flirting with another guy online.
In February 2013, she called her mother and said that she wanted to go back
with her mother, but she never achieved it. Several months later, Elena Cruz,
the criminal’s grandmother, got home and when she
went into the bedroom, she found victim body with 38 stab wounds all over her
body. It was a coldblooded murder. After the crime was over, Lithgow, the
criminal tried to eliminate the evidence, but the police found a knife with the
DNA of the victim. In the end the Lithgow’s
lawyer mentions that it was not the first time that they had broken his heart.
Moreover, his client had suffered a terrible childhood illness that had damaged
part of his brain.
"Why are Children Becoming Obese?"
This article is based on the investigation about the causes of childhood obesity by Dravid Kraft. Over the years the number of children with obesity has been increased drastically. There is a variety of reasons why children are becoming obese. One reason is their eating disorder; by eating an excessive amount of junk food and snacks, and not eating appropriate meals through out the day. Another reason is the lack of exercise among children. As the author mentions, children should do exercise every day for 30 minutes since it helps to develop to their growth and provide a good quality of health. Third reason that most children suffer from obesity is often caused by their own parents; they encourage their children to have an unhealthy life. Finally, the most common cause of childhood obesity is the lack sleep. Going to sleep early is the main quality for a child since it prevents weight problems.
“Childhood Obesity”
Childhood obesity has been becoming a significant problem in society since over the years the average of children with obesity has increased abruptly. In fact, several researchers have discovered that the most common cause of death all over the world is the obesity in such premature age. Children as well as teens are frequently affected by a struggle with their weight because of their inappropriate eating habits and their unhealthy way of life. There are many explanations for childhood obesity. According to David Kraft, children who struggle with obesity are the ones who do not exercise frequently. Children need to do exercise at least 30 minutes per day to reduce their chance of having problems with their weight. This essay will describe proposed solutions to the problem of childhood obesity. Finally, this essay will propose the best solution and explain, its benefits.
Researchers have discovered a variety of ways to solve or control this particular problem. According to Kimberley Leonard’s article, in Puerto Rico the federal government and states passed a new law to regulate their public health. This law was based to control and reduce childhood obesity by charging parents with $500 per kid that have children with overweight; however, if the child does not lost weight in six months the family will have to pay $800 for breaking the law. In addition, Children would be checked by their teachers while they are in school. Finally, this would help to keep them in healthy diet and an active shape. Stated to the author’s report Puerto Rico had been suffered for more than 30 years with this catastrophe. Ted Kyle one of the people who were against to the new law argued that this law was incoherent and instead of resolve it they would aggravate the issue. Rebecca Puhl was also against the new law in Puerto Rico. She said that the issue was a very complex and it should not be treated as something regular. Puerto Rico averages rate is about 18 percent an incredible percent for such a small county. I strongly support both commentaries since childhood obesity is one of the most common problems in our society that we should try to resolve it with the best serious way instead to avoid it. Charging to their parents was absurd stated by Kyle. Another solution that researchers have discovered is to have an active life by doing their daily exercise and having a nutritional meal. In addition, resting the appropriate hours reduce the chance to suffer obesity in the future. Being overweight is not just having health problem it is also affect your self-esteem and can cause you to be isolate from society. Stated by Center for Disease Control and Prevention, children with obesity are common to suffer with stigmatization and a low self-esteem.
We all know how serious this is; however, most of us do not do anything to try to resolve it. My classmate, Mo, and I have shared the same thoughts of how to resolve this problem. We as an adult should be the ones who should give children a good impression of how to live life in a healthy way. First of all, we would start in schools by creating more active activities, different kind of sports, sports clubs, and extend student’s time in gym. Therefore, kids could be excited to be part of and this would help them to be active. Then, we can make a healthy diet appropriate for their age and each day will change. Finally, we would give to the children’s parents a class called “Simple Steps,” every ones a week they would have to append with them children. This would count as a regular class and it would be obligatory to graduate from school. Throughout my personal experience I had seem a successfully result with this idea since back in my country Ecuador in Guayaquil a city close to the coast, most of the public school have this requires for their students. Our goal is to reduce the percent of childhood obesity to the lowers percent as possible.
"Happy"
What do you want from life? This is one of the most common questions that we ask ourselves. Most of us would say that they just want to be “happy”, but how could we be happy? According to Roko Belic, the director from the film Happy, people’s happiness is based on money and material things such as clothing, cars, and properties. However, there are some countries where people consider themselves delighted even though their economic system are notas strong as others. There are three categories that researchers have discovered that influence people’s happiness; 50% genetic, 10 % circumstances, and 40% “intentional activities”. First of all, genetic refers of ours genes that we inherit from our ancestors. Secondly, circumstances in life influence our personal experience that we have in our life. Lastly, Intentional activities are voluntary activities or actions that we choose to do. This essay will talk about what makes people happy and will introduce a significant person that had help to society to understand the real value of life. Finally, this essay will inculcate my personal goals in life for my future and will demonstrate the genuine value of having the opportunity to change the world by doing understandable things to make the world in a better place to live.
The book Until I say Goodbye by Susan Wendel is based on an inspirational woman who was diagnostic with ALS, she was forty-four. However, this did not stop her to keep going raising her three children Marina, Aubrey, and Wesley, who has autism. She was a journalist in Palm Beach Florida’s newspaper, her dream job. Months after her diagnosis, she decided to resign from her job since she was not capable of doing her work by herself. Months later she decided to share her life with society and leave a message to her family. As she mention in her book “If you cannot change the situation, change your attitude”, this means when you cannot change something, just try to adjust it and do your best to work it out. She was thankful for having a great family and she could not have asked for more. Susan Wendel established that most of our happiness comes from our “intentional activities” from our choice. She decided to spend her life with the people she loves and “plant memories”.
I agree with this quote since 50% of people’s happiness tends to come from people’s ancestors; 40% come from personal actions, and 10% from surroundings. We are the ones who can change this by being more empathetic and trying to help others without expecting anything. By doing this, we can change the world to a better place to live life. Last winter when I was going to pay for my ticket for the bus, I noticed that I had not brought my bus card; luckily, there was a guy in the bus who paid for my ticket and I felt so grateful for it. This is one example of empathy and how a singular person can change things.
Overall, life is a small box full of surprises waiting for us, some of them already come with us such as our genes, other ones will happen later on and others will be your choice. However, it is your decision whether you want to interpret this like Susan Wendel did. Looking forward, I would like to achieve one of my major goals in life which is to graduate from college. Graduating from college will be a gift for my parents since I will be the first one in my family who would have a bachelor’s degree. Being “happy” is not just about yourself; it is also about others. You know how whenever you see someone happy, angry, or sad, you feel the same way as others. That is empathy being in someone else’s shoes. One advice I can give you is to be happy with the little things that you already have and do your best to change this planet.
The book Until I say Goodbye by Susan Wendel is based on an inspirational woman who was diagnostic with ALS, she was forty-four. However, this did not stop her to keep going raising her three children Marina, Aubrey, and Wesley, who has autism. She was a journalist in Palm Beach Florida’s newspaper, her dream job. Months after her diagnosis, she decided to resign from her job since she was not capable of doing her work by herself. Months later she decided to share her life with society and leave a message to her family. As she mention in her book “If you cannot change the situation, change your attitude”, this means when you cannot change something, just try to adjust it and do your best to work it out. She was thankful for having a great family and she could not have asked for more. Susan Wendel established that most of our happiness comes from our “intentional activities” from our choice. She decided to spend her life with the people she loves and “plant memories”.
I agree with this quote since 50% of people’s happiness tends to come from people’s ancestors; 40% come from personal actions, and 10% from surroundings. We are the ones who can change this by being more empathetic and trying to help others without expecting anything. By doing this, we can change the world to a better place to live life. Last winter when I was going to pay for my ticket for the bus, I noticed that I had not brought my bus card; luckily, there was a guy in the bus who paid for my ticket and I felt so grateful for it. This is one example of empathy and how a singular person can change things.
Overall, life is a small box full of surprises waiting for us, some of them already come with us such as our genes, other ones will happen later on and others will be your choice. However, it is your decision whether you want to interpret this like Susan Wendel did. Looking forward, I would like to achieve one of my major goals in life which is to graduate from college. Graduating from college will be a gift for my parents since I will be the first one in my family who would have a bachelor’s degree. Being “happy” is not just about yourself; it is also about others. You know how whenever you see someone happy, angry, or sad, you feel the same way as others. That is empathy being in someone else’s shoes. One advice I can give you is to be happy with the little things that you already have and do your best to change this planet.
Birth Order
According to the author, Forer, birth order plays a very meaningful role in a child’s personality and their role in the family. The first born will be the person who will guide his or her siblings and tends to be more responsible as an adult; however, the middle child is more patient, plus they are very cautious in their actions, while the youngest are most likely the opposite of both of them since they are the baby of the family and the ones who attract parents’ attention. Moreover, the only child are often the “eyes of their parents” and tend to be depend more on her or his parents, but when they are not around, they are more secure of themselves. I personally believe that “birth order” does not affect a child’s personality since child development has more to do with the environment impact. Specifically, I propose two causes that dispute birth order such as individual personality and circumstances that life gave you. First of all, according to the author, youngest child are “manipulators, easygoing, outgoing, charming, and plus they have lack self-discipline”. In the first place, I am the youngest child but I am totally different from the author’s point of view since I am more responsible than my older brother and even more patient. Most of my family members’ love and attention is for my brother, especially my grandmother; she even says it while I am around her. When my brother was born, my grandmother decided to take care of him since my mother had to work, and he was raised as the only child until five years, later his nightmare came his little sister. Lastly, both of us have different personalities and we do not even look alike at all, but we love each other. While we were in Ecuador, there was a time period that we were separate, and he was living in my uncle’s house when I was in my friend’s house because our parents were having a difficult time. In all due fairness, birth order seems not to affect child characteristic. What really affects personally are circumstances that you have to go through, life change you over time.
According to the author, Forer, birth order plays a very meaningful role in a child’s personality and their role in the family. The first born will be the person who will guide his or her siblings and tends to be more responsible as an adult; however, the middle child is more patient, plus they are very cautious in their actions, while the youngest are most likely the opposite of both of them since they are the baby of the family and the ones who attract parents’ attention. Moreover, the only child are often the “eyes of their parents” and tend to be depend more on her or his parents, but when they are not around, they are more secure of themselves. I personally believe that “birth order” does not affect a child’s personality since child development has more to do with the environment impact. Specifically, I propose two causes that dispute birth order such as individual personality and circumstances that life gave you. First of all, according to the author, youngest child are “manipulators, easygoing, outgoing, charming, and plus they have lack self-discipline”. In the first place, I am the youngest child but I am totally different from the author’s point of view since I am more responsible than my older brother and even more patient. Most of my family members’ love and attention is for my brother, especially my grandmother; she even says it while I am around her. When my brother was born, my grandmother decided to take care of him since my mother had to work, and he was raised as the only child until five years, later his nightmare came his little sister. Lastly, both of us have different personalities and we do not even look alike at all, but we love each other. While we were in Ecuador, there was a time period that we were separate, and he was living in my uncle’s house when I was in my friend’s house because our parents were having a difficult time. In all due fairness, birth order seems not to affect child characteristic. What really affects personally are circumstances that you have to go through, life change you over time.
"Love"
Love is a powerful feeling that make you lose your head specially when that person love you back such as "The Lion's hair". This story was based it on a couple that were having problem in their marriage since the husband was not as attend as his wife was toward him. They were in love but there was problem that was breaking the relationship apart. The husband did not talk to his wife so his wife decided to go to a "Shaman" in order to resolve this problem. She commented about her problem of her marriage but the shaman gave her an unexpected answer in order to improve your marriage you have to get me a lion's hair. The woman was so confuse why does he need a lion's hair, she said that it was impossible so the shaman said that her marriage was over then. If she cannot do this there was not an answer for her marriage. She told shaman that she will do anything in order to have her marriage normal as it was. A few weeks later the woman came back with the lion's hair in her hand to the shaman, he took it and burned it. He looked at her and said this was the answer if she could that she can do anything. In that moment she understood that there was not an antidote or any kind of magic. It was about the courage that every people have by being optimistic in life. Nothing is impossible you are who decide whether you want to keep going or not.
Love is a powerful feeling that make you lose your head specially when that person love you back such as "The Lion's hair". This story was based it on a couple that were having problem in their marriage since the husband was not as attend as his wife was toward him. They were in love but there was problem that was breaking the relationship apart. The husband did not talk to his wife so his wife decided to go to a "Shaman" in order to resolve this problem. She commented about her problem of her marriage but the shaman gave her an unexpected answer in order to improve your marriage you have to get me a lion's hair. The woman was so confuse why does he need a lion's hair, she said that it was impossible so the shaman said that her marriage was over then. If she cannot do this there was not an answer for her marriage. She told shaman that she will do anything in order to have her marriage normal as it was. A few weeks later the woman came back with the lion's hair in her hand to the shaman, he took it and burned it. He looked at her and said this was the answer if she could that she can do anything. In that moment she understood that there was not an antidote or any kind of magic. It was about the courage that every people have by being optimistic in life. Nothing is impossible you are who decide whether you want to keep going or not.
Future Perfect
The future perfect is used to explain an activity that is completed before another action. We usually use future perfect to say that something will be finished in a certain period of time in the future. Moreover, we also use the future perfect with "by" or "in" such as I will have finished eating by the time you come home.
Future Perfect Progressive Tense
The future perfect progressive tense indicates an on going action that will be finished at a some specific time in the future. This tense is formed with the modal " will+ have+ been+ the present participle of the verb (with the -ing ending)". For example, We will have been sleeping all day.
Overall, both tense are used to talk about events or actions in the future.
The future perfect is used to explain an activity that is completed before another action. We usually use future perfect to say that something will be finished in a certain period of time in the future. Moreover, we also use the future perfect with "by" or "in" such as I will have finished eating by the time you come home.
Future Perfect Progressive Tense
The future perfect progressive tense indicates an on going action that will be finished at a some specific time in the future. This tense is formed with the modal " will+ have+ been+ the present participle of the verb (with the -ing ending)". For example, We will have been sleeping all day.
Overall, both tense are used to talk about events or actions in the future.
Friendship
Did you know that having a friend is a significant role in a person’s life since they help you to vent when you want to talk about your problems or need help, they will be there for you, they encourage when one is doleful, and they captivate whenever one is cheerless. However, it is hard to find a real friend who is trustworthy and will not betray you for anything even though it seems difficult to do. Being a good friend does not just mean being loyal, understanding, and encouraging; it also means spending time with one another even if you have to cancel other things. In this essay, I will talk about several reasons why a friendship does not last long enough through our life and the main qualities that a person looks for in a friend.
There are many reasons why two people end their friendship such as feeling busy and not having time to share with one another, and as well as distance. Both causes are the natural killer of friendship. The time that a person spends with a friend is valuable because it helps to make the relationship more powerful and meaningful. When a friend has to move for some reason, the distance between the two of them become an impediment to keeping their relationship stable. At the beginning, both of them would call one another but as the days pass on, it will decrease the frequency until this ended up an not returned call. Moreover, it is hard to confer time with a friend if one is busy with work, schools, and others activities. Eventually, in that kind of situation, the relationship will drift aside. I personally believe that when friends go two different ways, the relationship between them often ends for a simple reason. The frequency of spending time with one another will reduce until there is none. However, it is our choice if we want to keep going. I recently experienced a similar situation, my partner “in crime”, as we usually call ourselves, we are passing a difficult stage of life. Her name is Camille and she is a junior high school teenager, the stage of revolution and the avalanche of responsibilities. We all pass through that period and we know how difficult it is to balance all of that. At the same time, I am alum of CLIP; this is an English program that Queens Community College offers people whom would like to improve their English skills. Both of us have a tough schedule and we try to balance it such as hanging out on weekends but this is not and so working our friendship is getting weaker as the days goes on.
Furthermore, loyalty is another reason that can make a friendship end easily since no one would like to keep a relationship with this kind of problem. Trust is gained by having trustworthy friends. There is once in a person’s life when one would like to share a secret to a friend whom they fully trust will not discuss their personal secret. More likely a loyal friend will always protect his or she friend’s secret under any circumstances. In personal experience, friendship means being the person who will protect to one another especially those days when it seems that there is not exit but there is one light at the end of the tunnel. Having someone who is your confidential friend that no matter what you tell them, they would not reveal it. To me that is what basically a real friend is.
Finally, lack of understanding is often presented as a cause that destroys a friendship. A real friend will understand what you are going through and they will do anything to help. However, there has to be good communication between them to let them feel free to unburden their feelings. On the other hand, this does not mean that we have to know every single detail about their life since as human beings we need our private space where we are free from criticisms. If they want to share their personal problems that is when we show up otherwise we cannot get into the issue.
For the aforementioned reasons, there is no doubt that having a friend is essential for our lifetime because when a person faces obstacles, friends will be there to encourage them to keep going and not let them face those obstacles alone. Friendship is about working together to maintain a relationship between the two people. Now in our days having an authentic friend is a bonus that life gives us and we should not waste it. As Francois Muriac said, “No love, no friendship can cross the path of our destiny without leaving some mark on it forever”, friends will always leave a genuine memories that will be unforgettable to forget. This does not mean that life ends there instead a new beginning for fresh adventures.
Did you know that having a friend is a significant role in a person’s life since they help you to vent when you want to talk about your problems or need help, they will be there for you, they encourage when one is doleful, and they captivate whenever one is cheerless. However, it is hard to find a real friend who is trustworthy and will not betray you for anything even though it seems difficult to do. Being a good friend does not just mean being loyal, understanding, and encouraging; it also means spending time with one another even if you have to cancel other things. In this essay, I will talk about several reasons why a friendship does not last long enough through our life and the main qualities that a person looks for in a friend.
There are many reasons why two people end their friendship such as feeling busy and not having time to share with one another, and as well as distance. Both causes are the natural killer of friendship. The time that a person spends with a friend is valuable because it helps to make the relationship more powerful and meaningful. When a friend has to move for some reason, the distance between the two of them become an impediment to keeping their relationship stable. At the beginning, both of them would call one another but as the days pass on, it will decrease the frequency until this ended up an not returned call. Moreover, it is hard to confer time with a friend if one is busy with work, schools, and others activities. Eventually, in that kind of situation, the relationship will drift aside. I personally believe that when friends go two different ways, the relationship between them often ends for a simple reason. The frequency of spending time with one another will reduce until there is none. However, it is our choice if we want to keep going. I recently experienced a similar situation, my partner “in crime”, as we usually call ourselves, we are passing a difficult stage of life. Her name is Camille and she is a junior high school teenager, the stage of revolution and the avalanche of responsibilities. We all pass through that period and we know how difficult it is to balance all of that. At the same time, I am alum of CLIP; this is an English program that Queens Community College offers people whom would like to improve their English skills. Both of us have a tough schedule and we try to balance it such as hanging out on weekends but this is not and so working our friendship is getting weaker as the days goes on.
Furthermore, loyalty is another reason that can make a friendship end easily since no one would like to keep a relationship with this kind of problem. Trust is gained by having trustworthy friends. There is once in a person’s life when one would like to share a secret to a friend whom they fully trust will not discuss their personal secret. More likely a loyal friend will always protect his or she friend’s secret under any circumstances. In personal experience, friendship means being the person who will protect to one another especially those days when it seems that there is not exit but there is one light at the end of the tunnel. Having someone who is your confidential friend that no matter what you tell them, they would not reveal it. To me that is what basically a real friend is.
Finally, lack of understanding is often presented as a cause that destroys a friendship. A real friend will understand what you are going through and they will do anything to help. However, there has to be good communication between them to let them feel free to unburden their feelings. On the other hand, this does not mean that we have to know every single detail about their life since as human beings we need our private space where we are free from criticisms. If they want to share their personal problems that is when we show up otherwise we cannot get into the issue.
For the aforementioned reasons, there is no doubt that having a friend is essential for our lifetime because when a person faces obstacles, friends will be there to encourage them to keep going and not let them face those obstacles alone. Friendship is about working together to maintain a relationship between the two people. Now in our days having an authentic friend is a bonus that life gives us and we should not waste it. As Francois Muriac said, “No love, no friendship can cross the path of our destiny without leaving some mark on it forever”, friends will always leave a genuine memories that will be unforgettable to forget. This does not mean that life ends there instead a new beginning for fresh adventures.
CAT-W Practice
Did you know doing exercise could be helpful to do before taking a test? According to Charles Hillman, walking 20 minutes before a test increases the children's scores since this produce a higher proteins for the brain cells. Swedish had found that more than a million young boys who were in the army, had a great fitness were correlated by higher I.Q.'S. Identical twins were the most higher I.Q and their fitness were basically more likely to go on to "lucrative careers". fit; however, there was none correlation found on both muscular strength and I.Q scores. According to the researchers, there is not evidence that doing exercise will leads to a higher I.Q., but they suspect that aerobic exercise could produce some specific factors and proteins that help to stimulate the cells brain. Kuhn mentioned that the more aerobic exercise do young people, the more it would help them in their I.Q. since it has a powerful result. Although doing exercise help us to be active and to stimulate the brain in a young child, it also affect their energy by feeling exhausted and not having energy to do a test.
There are several kind of reasons why you should not do exercise before a test. One reason, it is because of the energy that it takes you while you are doing exercise. For, example, walking for 20 minutes will get you tired while resting will help you to relax and feel more confident about the test. Furthermore, being active help us to be more healthy it also reduce our potential to do another action afterward.
To conclude, doing exercise for young people motivate to be more healthy.
Did you know doing exercise could be helpful to do before taking a test? According to Charles Hillman, walking 20 minutes before a test increases the children's scores since this produce a higher proteins for the brain cells. Swedish had found that more than a million young boys who were in the army, had a great fitness were correlated by higher I.Q.'S. Identical twins were the most higher I.Q and their fitness were basically more likely to go on to "lucrative careers". fit; however, there was none correlation found on both muscular strength and I.Q scores. According to the researchers, there is not evidence that doing exercise will leads to a higher I.Q., but they suspect that aerobic exercise could produce some specific factors and proteins that help to stimulate the cells brain. Kuhn mentioned that the more aerobic exercise do young people, the more it would help them in their I.Q. since it has a powerful result. Although doing exercise help us to be active and to stimulate the brain in a young child, it also affect their energy by feeling exhausted and not having energy to do a test.
There are several kind of reasons why you should not do exercise before a test. One reason, it is because of the energy that it takes you while you are doing exercise. For, example, walking for 20 minutes will get you tired while resting will help you to relax and feel more confident about the test. Furthermore, being active help us to be more healthy it also reduce our potential to do another action afterward.
To conclude, doing exercise for young people motivate to be more healthy.
Ashley Erazo
Mr. Kelly
May 04, 2015
Draft # 3
What characteristics does a supervisor need in order to be a admirable for his/her employees? We might think that being a manager is a piece of cake since it has its benefits; however, a good manager needs to have a variety of skills that will influence others people to become a better person. A manager is that person who will be able to keep everything in order and at the same time be kind, and gentlest with his/her employees. However, this does not mean that the manager needs to accept or attend to what employees’ desire. There are many other qualities that a manager should have to work appropriately.
One of the main qualities to be a successful manager is to treat everyone the same way without any preferences or favorite. Working as a team will produce a peaceful environment to work in. Team work is the ability to work together cooperatively to achieve a common goal. I personally believe that working together helps to be more unified and cooperate with one another to be more efficient. When people work together as a group, they become more aware in one another than just themselves. It helps to learn how to listen to other people’s opinion and ideas to make it better for everyone. “Two heads are better than one” as my manager usually says, being one person helps us to share our thoughts and goals allow them to do their best work. This is very crucial for a business or cooperation since it produces that every member work as one team to achieve a unit goal, it also demonstrate that the manager who is forming a team have an excellent relationship with his/her employees.
Another main quality for being a better manager is respect between one another. Being polite will help to maintain the relationship neutral. According to Lucky Adelen, one of my friends from Clip, a good manager should have a pleasant relationship with everyone at work since this will demonstrate a satisfaction that will empowers employees to feel conformable in the work area. Manager is a role model for employees for his/her efficiency work and comprehensively advantage of understand others. Every employee should feel free to communicate with their supervisor any type of problem. Furthermore, a manager should also care about others’ desires not just what would be best for them. An exceptional manager will do all this and will also bring people together by arranging and challenging appreciation in the corporation. With good judgment, I support her view in this particular topic because building an understandable relationship needs to have an open communication to leave in a pleasant relationship.
The third main key to becoming a favorable manager is patience. Having the ability of resolve any problem with the calmest way is one benefit that most of the managers would need to have. For example, when there is a complicated customer and they are giving you a hard time by fighting with you, then you are trying to calm down them. However, they are just too close to listening others; this is when you need to be more patience with this particular situation by not losing yourself. Some people cannot tolerate any type of adverse situations just because they are in bad mood.
For the aforementioned reasons, there is no doubt that all this qualities that were mention are one of many steps that a manager should follow in order to succeed into the business world. Treat as others as you would like to be treated the key to maintain an agreeable relationship with others.
Mr. Kelly
May 04, 2015
Draft # 3
What characteristics does a supervisor need in order to be a admirable for his/her employees? We might think that being a manager is a piece of cake since it has its benefits; however, a good manager needs to have a variety of skills that will influence others people to become a better person. A manager is that person who will be able to keep everything in order and at the same time be kind, and gentlest with his/her employees. However, this does not mean that the manager needs to accept or attend to what employees’ desire. There are many other qualities that a manager should have to work appropriately.
One of the main qualities to be a successful manager is to treat everyone the same way without any preferences or favorite. Working as a team will produce a peaceful environment to work in. Team work is the ability to work together cooperatively to achieve a common goal. I personally believe that working together helps to be more unified and cooperate with one another to be more efficient. When people work together as a group, they become more aware in one another than just themselves. It helps to learn how to listen to other people’s opinion and ideas to make it better for everyone. “Two heads are better than one” as my manager usually says, being one person helps us to share our thoughts and goals allow them to do their best work. This is very crucial for a business or cooperation since it produces that every member work as one team to achieve a unit goal, it also demonstrate that the manager who is forming a team have an excellent relationship with his/her employees.
Another main quality for being a better manager is respect between one another. Being polite will help to maintain the relationship neutral. According to Lucky Adelen, one of my friends from Clip, a good manager should have a pleasant relationship with everyone at work since this will demonstrate a satisfaction that will empowers employees to feel conformable in the work area. Manager is a role model for employees for his/her efficiency work and comprehensively advantage of understand others. Every employee should feel free to communicate with their supervisor any type of problem. Furthermore, a manager should also care about others’ desires not just what would be best for them. An exceptional manager will do all this and will also bring people together by arranging and challenging appreciation in the corporation. With good judgment, I support her view in this particular topic because building an understandable relationship needs to have an open communication to leave in a pleasant relationship.
The third main key to becoming a favorable manager is patience. Having the ability of resolve any problem with the calmest way is one benefit that most of the managers would need to have. For example, when there is a complicated customer and they are giving you a hard time by fighting with you, then you are trying to calm down them. However, they are just too close to listening others; this is when you need to be more patience with this particular situation by not losing yourself. Some people cannot tolerate any type of adverse situations just because they are in bad mood.
For the aforementioned reasons, there is no doubt that all this qualities that were mention are one of many steps that a manager should follow in order to succeed into the business world. Treat as others as you would like to be treated the key to maintain an agreeable relationship with others.
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Ashley
Erazo
April
08, 2015
Mr.
Kelly
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In this first haft way of my second
semester being a Clip student I have learned so many things such as how to use
articles or when it is the right time to use it, how to identify a noun, verb,
adjective, and adverb (part of speech), subject-verb agreement, word forms,
prepositions, and the verb tense review. In addition, I have
improved drastically on my reading, writing, and my way to how I express my
thoughts since working in group has been helpful help thought me. In this reflection essay, I will
describe what I have learned so far this semester, and what I would like to
improve in the second semester.
This semester our class participated
in the QCC Campus Common Read. Being part of the common read was something
wonderful since it help us to interact with others people and share ours
thoughts. It also has helped us to understand the real meaning of “empathy” since the book that
we read was Until I Say Good-Bye by Susan Welden. It was about on Susan’s
life a woman of forty four who got ALS; however, this book is not about how
she gave up or how she leave her family in bankrupt, it based on how she
decided to spend her last moments by enjoying with the people she love, and as
she said in the book “plant memories” and leave a message
to society that whenever there is a barrel in your life you have to overcome
and move on like she mention “Don’t
cry because it is over, smile because it is happening”.
This book was a grateful example of empathy.
In addition to participating in the
Common Read, was impressive since it allow us to interact with others people
and share our views, and expectation. It also helped us to meat fantastic
people who have been passed into a hard time but they had found the exit of it
such as Valerie Estess the creator of “The
Ice Bucket Challenge” since her sister was diagnostic with
ALS while she was only 35 after the diagnostic, her sister started her mission
to unite scientists to work together to find the cure of ASL by recollecting
money. Therefore, the main cause of this project was to show society about this
rare disease. “The Ice Bucket
Challenge” was an activity
involving dumping a bucket of ice water on your head to promote conscience
about the disease. She commented that her sister motives her to be a writer
which she always had loved but she always was insecure to do it.
The second
haft of the semester I would like to extend my academic vocabulary and improve
the handwritten part. I believe that reading more frequently it would help to
improve my writing and as well my speech fluency. Writing more often
will produce a good benefit in my knowledge.
CAT-W PRACTICE
Are you undecided about which major you would like to go to? According to Jean Fitz, “Helping College Graduates Find Jobs,” there is a very high percent of students who go for one major but at the end they ended up with a different one. Also, some graduate students cannot find a job after they finish college. In the state of Wisconsin, they started a new system that will help students from community colleges to help them to determine their passion and abilities. This is based on a simple test that would help to find their skills matching with their personalities. Furthermore, it will help to find a job and careers that are needed in the near area. Finally, this will produce a positive result to the state by collecting more taxes and by increasing more opportunities for everyone. I agree with the author’s idea that we should help our generation find motivation in their life because if we do not help, there is not going to be a future.
College students are usually immature in their decision making and they could make incorrect choices that are why we should help them to prepare them for the real world. There are many reasons why we should advices college students. Choosing a major could be hard to do by yourself. We could have no idea what we want to become or we just do not know our talents. This is a very complex step for our life since this will last forever. There are many College graduates student that are working in a job that they hate because they might not have had any advice or just choose the wrong way. This affects the economy by reducing opportunities to those who will enjoy it and would work with enthusiastically, and energetically like it should be. If we keep going like this, we are never going to progress.
Another reason why we should help students is because of our economy since financial aid is one of the helps that the government offers to every student who wants to go to college. This money is
College students are usually immature in their decision making and they could make incorrect choices that are why we should help them to prepare them for the real world. There are many reasons why we should advices college students. Choosing a major could be hard to do by yourself. We could have no idea what we want to become or we just do not know our talents. This is a very complex step for our life since this will last forever. There are many College graduates student that are working in a job that they hate because they might not have had any advice or just choose the wrong way. This affects the economy by reducing opportunities to those who will enjoy it and would work with enthusiastically, and energetically like it should be. If we keep going like this, we are never going to progress.
Another reason why we should help students is because of our economy since financial aid is one of the helps that the government offers to every student who wants to go to college. This money is